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원고
교정 후 원고
Remarks
Remark 1:
For technical clarity to your readers, please consider revising the highlighted sentence to “This law…conversion of the energies of the baryons and leptons…into entropy.”Explanations
[Explanation1]: Singular/Plural:
Since the subject here is plural (black holes), its corresponding pronoun should also be plural.
[Explanation2]: Word choice:
In academic writing, information is presented with accuracy and conciseness. Formal language is a hallmark of academic English. One way to ensure conciseness in expression is converting phrasal verbs to formal words.
[Explanation3]: Article usage:
Use of an article for correct grammatical expression
[Explanation4]: Language enhancement:
Revision made for enhanced flow and transition
[Explanation6]: Subject-specific revision:
Sentence transition and clarity have been improved according to the technical context.
[Explanation7]: Article usage:
Since a specific “matter” is being referred to here, the definite article "the" is required.
[Explanation8]: Subject-specific revision:
An alternative sentence has been recommended to the author.
[Explanation9]: Typographical error:
This spelling has been corrected.
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원고
교정 후 원고
Remarks
Remark 1:
For technical clarity to your readers, please consider revising the highlighted sentence to “This law…conversion of the baryonic and leptonic energies…into entropy.”Explanations
[Explanation1]: Language correctness:
Readability—Joining two sentences to avoid redundancy and enhance readability.[Explanation2]: Language enhancement:
Readability—Use of a pronoun to avoid repetition.[Explanation3]: Technical word choice:
In this context, “concentration” is a better technical word choice to be used.[Explanation4]: Adverb placement:
In the passive voice, adverbs of manner are generally placed between the helping and main verbs.[Explanation5]: Academic word choice:
In academic writing, information is presented with accuracy and conciseness. Formal language is a hallmark of academic English. One way to ensure conciseness in expression is converting phrasal verbs to formal words.[Explanation6]:Subject-specific revision:
Sentence transition and clarity have been improved according to the technical context.[Explanation7]:Subject-specific revision:
An alternative concise sentence has been recommended to the author.[Explanation8]: Sentence clarity:
This change has been made to prevent ambiguity between the statements of facts and the experiments conducted in this study.
[Explanation9]: Style:
In American English, that is used to introduce a restrictive clause and which a nonrestrictive clause. Here we have changed that to which as this clause is non-restrictive.
