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원고
교정 후 원고
Remarks
Remark 1:
Because of restrictions on the word count, this sentence should be summarized to "Here, X is a 5 × 5 matrix that characterizes the material of the body, called the elasticity matrix; its components are called elasticities or elastic constants."Explanations
[Explanation1]: Word Choice:
“Drawing” has been replaced with an appropriate word “pulling.”
[Explanation2]: Grammar:
The preposition “of” conveys the meaning of the action accurately.
[Explanation3]: Grammar:
The definite article is required here to indicate specificity.
[Explanation4]: Language:
This sentence has been made concise and readable.
[Explanation5]: Typographical error:
The repeated article has been deleted.
[Explanation6]: Language:
This sentence has been edited to ensure that information is clear and readable.
[Explanation7]: Formatting:
As per journal guidelines, “Eq.” should be used.
[Explanation8]: Language:
This sentence has been made concise and accurate by removing redundancies and using appropriate words (“relationship” instead of “relation”).
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원고
교정 후 원고
Remarks
Remark 1:
Because of word count restrictions, this sentence should be summarized to "Here, X is a 5 × 5 matrix that characterizes the material of the body, called the elasticity matrix; its components are called elasticities or elastic constants."Explanations
[Explanation1]: Language:
This sentence has been made concise and readable.
[Explanation2]: Typographical error:
The repeated article has been deleted.
[Explanation3]: Language:
This sentence has been edited to ensure that information is clear, readable.
[Explanation4]: Language:
This sentence has been heavily edited for clarity. A remark has been written to the author to check for any change in the intended meaning.
[Explanation5]: Formatting:
As per journal guidelines, “Eq.” should be used.
[Explanation6]: Word Choice:
The phrase “make sure” has been replaced with “ensure” to eliminate wordiness.
[Explanation7]: Language:
This sentence has been made accurate by removing redundancies and using appropriate words (“relationship” instead of “relation”).
