영문교정, 영어교정,논문교정,영어논문교정,영어논문교정

역사학 (History)

아래의 원고 샘플을 통해 프리미엄과 수퍼 프리미엄의 교정범위를 비교해 보십시오. 우측 링크에서 교정원고 이외 논문평가카드, 교정 증명서, 커버레터의 샘플도 다운로드 하실 수 있습니다.

  • 원고

    교정 후 원고

    Remarks

    Remark 1:
    The original text was unclear. Please check if the edited text conveys your intended meaning.

    Remark 3:
    We have edited this quote. Please insert a reference for this citation.

    Remark 2:
    The correct term is “rinascimento.” Please check this.

    Explanations

    [Explanation1]: Language:
    An advance edit reconstructs sentences to ensure smooth progression of ideas, clarity in meaning, and readability.

    [Explanation2]: Language:
    “Art” has been added here to ensure clarity in meaning.

    [Explanation3]: Language:
    “Gave way” is an accurate word choice that keeps the intended meaning intact.

    [Explanation4]: Language:
    The common noun “art” has been changed to lowercase.

    [Explanation5]: Subject area:
    The discipline-specific word choice has been corrected (Low Countries).

    [Explanation6]: Grammar:
    The definite article is required here as a specific event is being mentioned.

    [Explanation7]: Grammar:
    The definite article is required before a time period.

    [Explanation8]: Clarity:
    This sentence has been edited for clarity. This change is brought to the notice of the author through a remark.

    [Explanation9]: Grammar We have followed American English in this document. Therefore, single quotes have been replaced with double quotes.

    [Explanation10]: Subject area:
    “Rinascimento” is the correct subject-matter word to use. We have inserted a remark to bring this change to the author’s notice.

    [Explanation11]: Language:
    This sentence has been made formal by adding a specific subject “The term” followed by the correct verb “was coined by.” In addition, the spelling error in the name has been corrected.

    [Explanation12]: Language:
    The subject of the sentence has been made specific to avoid any ambiguity.

    [Explanation13]: Language:
    An advance edit ensures that information is grammatically correct and maintains the academic tone of the document.

    [Explanation14]: Language:
    Readability of this sentence has been improved.

    [Explanation15]: Attention to detail:
    The missing period has been added to the end of the sentence.

    [Explanation16]: Grammar The missing verb has been added here.

    [Explanation17]: Content accuracy:
    The quote has been made accurate. This is brought to the author’s notice through a remark, which also advises the author on including references. In addition, American English usage has been kept consistent throughout the document.

    [Explanation18]: Word Choice:
    “Revival” is a better word choice from the meaning perspective.

    [Explanation19]: Capitalization:
    This adjective has been derived form a proper noun, and hence capitalized.

    [Explanation20]: Language:
    The phrasal verb “delve into” is a better word phrase choice that brings out the implied meaning of the sentence.

    [Explanation21]: Capitalization:
    “Golden Era” is a proper noun for a historical period in Europe, and hence it is capitalized.

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